*sigh*
Writing in dialect is difficult. Getting dialogue to sound right is difficult.
Just…
If I could…
One suggestion…
JUST DON’T WRITE OUT HOW LITTLE KIDS TALK, OKAY?
I do not believe this FOUR-YEAR-OLD is having this conversation, even with her cutesy (if inconsistent) speech impediment. “Aw, it’s cute because she says words wrong.” NO! FALSE!
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